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Thursday, 5 December 2019

WHO AM I PROUD OF

WHO AM I PROUD OF 


I am proud of my school because it has a lot of kind people and a lot of beautiful faces everyday and a lot of new faces that come from other school like our new kids that go to Edmund Hillary school. My school is the most wonderful school ever when I first went to Edmund Hillary I thought I was not going to find friends on my first day but I did i find a lot of friends on my first day like my sister she found good and kind friends when she first started. I am proud of my school because there are a lot of smart and wonderful kids there.

3 comments:

  1. Hi jackwalin! I'm Eden from Paroa school Greymouth. We are your tuhi mai tuhi atu partners! Can you tell me a little about your self? This blog post is great you did a very good job. I just started at this school and i found a lot of new friends! Its good that you have found new friends as well! Your blog is super cool! Have a great day! From Eden!

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  2. Hi im Dion from Paroa school this is a good post but to be better than before you could of possibly talked about yourself and who are your friends it looks like this is a beautiful school and I would love to here more about you.Thanks

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  3. Hi Jackwalin this is me gunveen in your class. This ia an aowesome idea about telling something about your school.

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