I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Jackwalin Ight I can see you put a lot of effort into this. I think its a really good piece of writing and what makes it better. You are pushing kids around the world to take a Vaccine that they might be afraid of. Helping them know more about it and how it can help you in many ways. This is really helpful and hope for more work like this to come in the future. 😌
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ReplyDeleteIght I can see you put a lot of effort into this. I think its a really good piece of writing and what makes it better. You are pushing kids around the world to take a Vaccine that they might be afraid of. Helping them know more about it and how it can help you in many ways. This is really helpful and hope for more work like this to come in the future. 😌