Hi my name is jackwalin and i am 8 years old and i when to Happy day with my Family and my Sister inlore and my Other sister inlore .
And when i went in the happy days we all saw my Sister inlore sister and we all got some food and when we all go and see the People that were performing for a Another birthday and when we went to go and see we were I love to go get some more food for us and then after that we had some cake and. It was so yummy we tested the cake it was a cheesecake and when we go and see the cake we all sing happy Birthday and we all were playing and we all Have to go home and.
When we went home we all went sleep and the Next day we had breakfast and went back to happy days for my little brother's birthday and then we had fun and we stay there until night time and we saw some more people they were before me for another birthday and we all had fun and so thanks for looking at my Reading.
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