I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Jackwalin my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I like your blog post about "Inside earth". Next time maybe you could add a WALT about what you are learning on your blog and more information about this activity. But other then that,keep up the great work!
Hi im Dion from paroa school your post is true information but some people might not understand so maybe you could write information about it thanks Dion
Hi Jackwalin I really like your post but you should add some Information so people can understand it. Thank you for posting this on your blog and Keep up the good and grate work. Thank you -Margaret from your class.
Kia Orana Jackwalin, it's me Shriya from your class Rm 11, Great job on putting the words where it is supposed to be. Maybe next time you can add more information about this blog post and what it is about. Great job, keep up the good work
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Jackwalin my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I like your blog post about "Inside earth". Next time maybe you could add a WALT about what you are learning on your blog and more information about this activity. But other then that,keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi im Dion from paroa school your post is true information but some people might not understand so maybe you could write information about it thanks Dion
ReplyDeleteHi Jackwalin this is me Gunveen. It is good to see you telling others that what is inside of a volcano. I really like it.
ReplyDeleteHi Jackwalin I really like your post but you should add some Information so people can understand it. Thank you for posting this on your blog and Keep up the good and grate work.
ReplyDeleteThank you
-Margaret from your class.
Kia Orana Jackwalin,
ReplyDeleteit's me Shriya from your class Rm 11,
Great job on putting the words where it is supposed to be. Maybe next time you can add more information about this blog post and what it is about. Great job, keep up the good work
Hi Jackwalin,
ReplyDeleteI like the blog post about the earth do you now how thick the crust is.