I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Jackwalin I really like your blog post. Maybe next time you could do a little bit more and you could work on your spelling. Keep up the good work. From Lacey.
Hello Jackwalin. Wow. Looks like I gained a knowledge about Richie Mccaw. I actually never knew that he played for fourteen years. WOW fantastic. In my opinion I think you should add more creativity and colour but overall what you said about Richie Mccaw was fantastic.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi jackwalin i really liked this blog post about Richie McCaw i liked all your facts about him keep up the great work Jackwalin
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jackwalin I really like your blog post. Maybe next time you could do a little bit more and you could work on your spelling. Keep up the good work. From Lacey.
ReplyDeleteHello Jackwalin.
ReplyDeleteWow. Looks like I gained a knowledge about Richie Mccaw. I actually never knew that he played for fourteen years.
WOW fantastic. In my opinion I think you should add more creativity and colour but overall what you said about Richie Mccaw was fantastic.